you bite your friend like chocolate

hey, can you guys give me an opinion for the general gist of the film im planning on doing? its quite rough but i hope to start a script soon. find it under the cut, and send me an ask :)

At Perth College resides a young border by the name of Alexis, who is shy and prefers her nose buried in a book. She doesn’t like to go out of her way to associate with many besides her small group of friends, Dawn, Shayla and Irene. Alexis enjoys doing fortune telling for all her friends, doing things like tarot readings and etc, her specialty being matchmaking if the individual is having relationship troubles. Eventually, this talent goes from her little close knit circle into a wider scale, more people slowly coming to her for advice and a match to be made. Although becoming increasingly popular gradually, Alexis still remains humble, and secretly on the search for a partner. Despite her skill in spotting the perfect partner for others, she just keeps having bad luck with her own. A number of failed dates with several odd men and women, she eventually meets an girl at the library studying, loud and quirky, named Carmel. She falls head over heels instantly.